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Whispers of my Love by ~Lizzy350:iconLizzy350:



Whispers of my Love

I’m missing you
I miss your voice of sweet bells
The soft touch of your hands
And the smell of roses of your essence

I miss you
And at this moment I dunno how to go on
Without you

You are my light
The light to the truthness of my heart
I need you

I want to cry
And lift all my pain away
I want to cry
And tell you all that I feel

I miss you
And I want you to know that I love you
Why can’t you hear?

You are my Red Princess
You are the Rose that appeared in a dream
And I’m now The Rose Lover

How I wish you could be here
The kisses I would give
The closeness I would keep
The joys I would feel

The pain I feel now
Without you
You are my light
And I’m in shadows

I miss you
I love you
I wish you could just hear me
‘Cause my voice
is not more than whispers

Whispers

....whispers that don’t reach your ears…

Happy New Year, my sweet
I hope for your happiness
Wherever that may be




~TRL

January-01-2008
©2008-2009 ~Lizzy350
:iconlizzy350:

Author's Comments

god, i wish this didn't have to happen... why can't I just say these things to her? why? why my mouth is just shut and can't form words? why I have to keep everything inside? damn -_-

Kisses in your sleep, my Red Princess, my Red Rose

:rose:

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:icondarktigerzeta:
Whoo I like it!! I felt the same some time ago... but whatever, this is really good!!!

--
Why I'm waiting for the phone to ring?
Why silent clouds float towards me from far away
Why did love touch us?
Why I'm crying for the first time?
Why do I love you?
I don't know...
:iconlizzy350:
^.^ Thanks for your comment!

Ooh, I hope it wasn't that bad for you. I'm still struggling to get some kind of response from her. It's like she's taking everything in (what I write and stuff), but not letting me know what she thinks, and it's frustrating.

But yeah, glad you liked it! :)
:icondarktigerzeta:
You are very welcome, well it was really painful, I wasted 11 months in my life suffering because of her. And now I am thinking about it, she used to do the same; I wrote hundreds of poems for her and she was like "Oh, I can't understand your handwriting, maybe later alright?", or "hum... yeah you write cool stuff".

Oh and keep writting, I'm not Shakespeare and I can't write winner poems in a contest but I can say that you are really good!

--
Why I'm waiting for the phone to ring?
Why silent clouds float towards me from far away
Why did love touch us?
Why I'm crying for the first time?
Why do I love you?
I don't know...

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